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AliTheBandit, 08 Oct 2007 09:46 am
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slowly but steadily story and characters are developing (hopefully)...
i kinda can symphatize with enrico XD !
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tRickityHouses, 08 Oct 2007 10:58 pm
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ooo I thought they were gunna fight and everyone will be like OOOO damn this newcomer is good but that makes sense too.
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Terroquita, 09 Oct 2007 01:51 am
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Nice plot tvists. Good way to present the next though opponent and to build the suspension.
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AliTheBandit, 09 Oct 2007 10:10 am
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haha, nay, they won't fight right away. but it also won't end here :D
like terroquita said: before this fight i'll have to build up the characters a bit more first, hehehe ;)
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KeatHACK, 19 Oct 2007 02:26 pm
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Is it just me or does Karo look a LOT like a girl? Either way this is good so far.
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AliTheBandit, 19 Oct 2007 02:53 pm
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@KeatHACK: you're... uh... imagining things...
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